Natsuhiko Ruka

u]Vital Statistics:[/u]

Name: Natsuhiko Ruka
Age/Grade: 17/11 Grade
Gender: Transvestite
Height: 172 centimeters
Weight: 48 kilograms
Appearance: as Natsuhiko, he will be like this:


Relations:

Sexuality: Straight. And Natsuhiko is open about it.
Preferences: An action
Likes: Playing RPG game, acting, reading any kind of novels/manga, cleaning his/her own room, hang-out with his/her friends
Dislikes: the situation where he/she must spend his/her money very much, someone who already give up before they are do something to solve their problems


Back story:
History: Before going to Whisper Hallow Academy, his/her real name was Natsuki Ruka and he/she come from Japan. Natsuki has a very great passion for being an actress. But he/she has been refused by many producers 140 times for reasons he/she doesn't know and his/her friends also underestimate his/her acting ability, while the truth is he/she has already tried his/her best and his/her acting isn't bad at all. They also said that he/she isn't gifted enough to be an actor/actress, especially if the role is a male character in the movie. Until three years ago, he/she made a bet with his/her friends. They said, if Natsuki dresses up and acts as a guy in the entirity of her highschool life, then none of them will underestimate her anymore.

And Natsuki agreed with them. It doesn't mean she didn't like her life as a girl, but she wants to follow her dream to be an actress/actor. So she dresses up as a guy. As a guy, he takes the name of Natsuhiko, his long lost twin brother because he doesn't have any ideas for any other names. A few days later, she heard about Whisper Hallow Academy when she was browse the internet. Natsuki thinks it's a very good chance to prove what she had already said to her friends. So she apply, and attend the school as Natsuhiko right away...

While I applaud the idea of someone making a transvestite character, that's not actually a gender. And I'm not sure whether you think this is finished, it doesn't say anything in the title, but it doesn't look it.

I'm also going to take a guess that our first language isn't English, correct? If so, I can give you some help with the grammar of your profile if you like.

Admins: Sorry to sound like a mod when I'm not, I just had the urge.

Yes, my first language isn't english. I can't speak english very fluently. Sorry about the grammar. I will greatfully accept it if you want to help me, anyway..

I thought as much. And it's okay about the grammar, there's no need to apologise. I have a lot of patience for people like you, so don't worry about getting things wrong.
I'll pm you an edited version of you post, and if you have any questions about the changes I'll do my best to answer.

I've edited it again~!

you may still be working on this but a few things that will help others know your character is to put more description to your character, and the [Likes] section, it would help if you had more in that. such as the acting thing or maybe some smaller or not so important things your character may like.

Also in your history, where did your character come from before she/he came to Whisper Hallow Academy. Its ok if Salix helps you.


Salix, for a future reference, when you want to comment on someones character, comment once then move to pm, or go straight to pm for your comments. this will help me be able to just see their profiles and approve them or say what else they need. I don't mind if you help with their grammar or spelling, just try and keep it in pm.

I've edited it again now.

How about that?

Noted.

Looks good, Thank you, Approved.