Desiree Brooks

Name: Desiree Brooks

Age:16

Height: 5" 6'

Grade:11th

Sexuality:Straight / Enough experience

Prefrences:

• Long hair
  Nice abs
  Confidence
  Athletic
  Amazing eyes
  A guy that can party hard

Likes:

• Music!!!
  Hanging out with friends
  funny movies
  converse
  the beach
  skim boarding
  hoodies with ears
  staying out late

Dislikes:

• sad movies
  being used
  people who lie
  snobby girls
  blood

Apperance: She has waistlength, pin straight chocolate brown hair that was layered reapetedly. Her skin is creamy-pale with light pink blush natually on her cheeks. Has slightly more curvy figure than the average girl with long legs. Her eyes are olive green and the edges of her iris's are out lined with black rings. Also her pupals have golden spikes on the edges. She is light on her feet but can also be very clumsy and her old old friend used to called her "accident prone". Dramas never taken a huge effect on how she feels, if someone were to say something that wasnt very nice she'd just let it go and move on. Rarely is she caught being unhappy or down.


History: Desiree has been through alot of drama though the past years. She's moved around alot but has finally decided that this will be her place to stay. She comes from an upper class family in south Florida. The only people that she discovered she didnt get along with in anyway what so ever were her parents, they were exteremly over-protective and always wanted something better from her. She'd do anything to stay away from them. Eventually the stress of constantly fighting with them got to her and she broke. She was going to do anything she had to to get the freedom of being a normal teenager. Her parents didnt want her to leave and always made her pay her way so she got a scholarship to a nice school as far a way from home as possible. Her grades are always kept high even when it doesnt seem like she does any work. Looks have some affect but for them most part what she cares about is personality. She hopes to make many friends at the new school and keep the drama around her to the lowest point possible. She's always loved photography so she always has her camera when shes out.

A few things. in your looks, try and describe your chacture a little bit more.

Your char history is a little short and vague. Try and improve on what you have and add some to it.

If you need any help, feel free to ask for it. Now, I'm not the best one to ask but I beleive Karatsu is very helpfull.

does it look alright now?

Yes, thank you. Approved!